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If Saranta wished to qualify as one who loved his fellow man, he should have known that often the most secretive things are the most obvious.

If Saranta wanted to be seen as someone who cared about others, he should have realized that often the things we hide are the most obvious.

DISQUALIFIED

BY CHARLES L. FONTENAY

After the morning inspection tour, Tardo, the Solar Council's Planetary Aid agent, and his companion, Peo, were taken to the castle which stood on a hill overlooking the area.

After the morning inspection tour, Tardo, the Solar Council's Planetary Aid agent, and his companion, Peo, were taken to the castle that stood on a hill overlooking the area.

Tardo and Peo were entertained royally at luncheon by Saranta, their host, who appeared to be the wealthy overlord of this portion of the planet. The meal was delicious—tender, inch-thick steaks served with delicate wine sauce and half a dozen of the planet's exotic vegetables, topped off by a cool fruit dessert.

Tardo and Peo were treated like royalty at lunch by Saranta, their host, who seemed to be the wealthy ruler of this part of the planet. The meal was fantastic—tender, inch-thick steaks served with a delicate wine sauce and a variety of the planet's exotic vegetables, finished off with a refreshing fruit dessert.

"My recommendation will be of considerable importance to you," said Tardo as they ate. "If it is favorable, there is certain technical aid aboard ship which will be made available to you at once. Of course, you will not receive advanced equipment from the Solar Council until there is a more thorough investigation."

"My recommendation will be really important to you," Tardo said as they ate. "If it's positive, there’s specific technical support on the ship that will be available to you immediately. Of course, you won't get advanced equipment from the Solar Council until a more thorough investigation is completed."

"I'm afraid our culture is too simple and agrarian to win your approval," said Saranta modestly.

"I'm afraid our culture is too simple and agricultural to earn your approval," Saranta said modestly.

"That isn't a major consideration. The Council understands the difficulties that have faced colonies in other star systems. There are certain fundamental requirements, of course: no abnormal religious practices, no slavery ... well, you understand what I mean."

"That's not a big deal. The Council gets the challenges that colonies in other star systems have dealt with. There are some basic requirements, of course: no unusual religious practices, no slavery ... well, you know what I mean."

"We really feel that we have done well since we ... our ancestors, that is ... colonized our world a thousand years ago," said Saranta, toying with a wineglass. A smiling servant filled the glasses of Tardo and Peo. "You see, there was no fuel for the ship to explore other planets in the system, and the ship just rusted away. Since we are some distance from the solar system, yours is the first ship that has landed here since colonization."

"We really feel like we’ve done well since we... our ancestors, that is... colonized our world a thousand years ago," said Saranta, fiddling with a wine glass. A smiling servant topped off the glasses for Tardo and Peo. "You see, there was no fuel for the ship to explore other planets in the system, and the ship just rusted away. Since we’re quite a distance from the solar system, yours is the first ship to land here since colonization."

"You seem to have been lucky, though," said Peo. He was navigator of the Council ship, and had asked to accompany Tardo on the brief inspection trip. "You could have landed on a barren planet."

"You seem to have been lucky, though," said Peo. He was the navigator of the Council ship and had requested to join Tardo on the short inspection trip. "You could have ended up on a barren planet."

"Well, no, the colonizers knew it was liveable, from the first exploration expedition," said Saranta. "There were difficulties, of course. Luxuriant vegetation, but no animal life, so we had no animals to domesticate. Pulling a plow is hard work for a man."

"Well, no, the colonizers knew it was livable from the first exploration expedition," said Saranta. "There were difficulties, of course. There was lush vegetation, but no animal life, so we had no animals to domesticate. Pulling a plow is tough work for a man."

"But you were able to solve this situation in a humanitarian way?" asked Tardo, peering at him keenly. "That is to say, you didn't resort to slavery?"

"But you managed to handle this situation in a humane way?" asked Tardo, looking at him closely. "In other words, you didn't turn to slavery?"

Saranta smiled and spread his hands slightly.

Saranta smiled and spread his hands a little.

"Does this look like a slave society to you?" he countered. "The colonists were anxious to co-operate to make the planet liveable. No one objected to work."

"Does this look like a slave society to you?" he replied. "The colonists were eager to work together to make the planet livable. No one complained about putting in the effort."

"It's true we've seen no slaves, that we know about," said Tardo. "But two days is a short time for inspection. I must draw most of my conclusions from the attitudes of you and the others who are our hosts. How about the servants here?"

"It's true we haven't seen any slaves, that we know of," said Tardo. "But two days is a short time for a thorough inspection. I have to base most of my conclusions on the attitudes of you and the others who are hosting us. What about the servants here?"

"They are paid," answered Saranta, and added ruefully: "There are those of us who think they are paid too well. They have a union, you know."

"They get paid," Saranta replied, adding with a hint of regret, "Some of us believe they get paid too much. They have a union, you know."

Tardo laughed.

Tardo laughed.

"A carry-over from Earth, no doubt," he commented. "An unusual one, too, for a culture without technology."

"A carry-over from Earth, no doubt," he said. "It's also unusual for a culture without technology."

When the meal was over, the two men from the ship were conducted on a tour of the area. It was a neat agricultural community, with broad fields, well-constructed buildings and, a short distance from Saranta's castle-like home, a village in which artisans and craftsmen plied their peaceful trades.

When the meal was done, the two men from the ship were taken on a tour of the area. It was a tidy farming community, with wide fields, nicely built buildings and, a short distance from Saranta's castle-like home, a village where artisans and craftsmen practiced their peaceful trades.

Peo tried to notice what he thought Tardo would look for on such a short inspection. The Council agent, he knew, had had intensive training and many years of experience. It was hard for Peo to judge what factors Tardo would consider significant—probably very minor ones that the average man would not notice, he thought.

Peo tried to figure out what he thought Tardo would look for during such a quick inspection. He knew the Council agent had received extensive training and had many years of experience. It was difficult for Peo to determine which factors Tardo would find important—probably very small details that an average person wouldn’t notice, he thought.

Tardo had seemed most intent on the question of slavery, and Peo looked for signs of it. He could see none. The people of the planet had had time to conceal some things, of course. But the people they saw in the village wore a proud air of independence no slave could assume.

Tardo had seemed very focused on the issue of slavery, and Peo was on the lookout for any indications of it. He couldn’t find any. The people of the planet had clearly had time to hide some things. However, the locals they saw in the village displayed a proud sense of independence that no slave could ever have.

Saranta apologized for their having to walk, explaining that there was no other means of transportation on the planet.

Saranta apologized for having to walk, explaining that there was no other way to get around on the planet.

"And, without transportation, you can understand why we have not been able to develop a technology," he added. "We hope transport will be included in the first assistance you will give us."

"And, without transportation, you can see why we haven't been able to develop technology," he added. "We hope transportation will be part of the first support you provide us."

Tardo asked about the fields.

Tardo asked about the farms.

"I see there is no one working them," he said. "Is that done by the villagers?"

"I see no one is working them," he said. "Do the villagers do that?"

"Our labor supply is transient," answered Saranta after a moment's hesitation. "The laborers who will work our fields—for a wage, of course—are probably in the next town or the one beyond it now."

"Our workforce is temporary," Saranta replied after a moment of hesitation. "The workers who will farm our land—obviously for a wage—are likely in the next town or the one after that right now."

Alpha Persei was sinking in the western sky when Tardo and Peo took their leave of Saranta and made their way down the road toward their planetary landing craft.

Alpha Persei was setting in the western sky when Tardo and Peo said goodbye to Saranta and headed down the road toward their spacecraft.

"It looks like a good world to me," said Peo. "If tomorrow's inspection is as satisfactory, I suppose you will recommend the beginning of technical aid?"

"It seems like a good world to me," Peo said. "If tomorrow's inspection goes well, I guess you'll suggest starting technical aid?"

"There will be no inspection tour tomorrow, and I shall recommend against aid at this time," replied Tardo. "I've seen enough."

"There won't be an inspection tour tomorrow, and I’ll advise against any aid right now," Tardo replied. "I've seen enough."

"Why?" asked Peo, surprised.

"Why?" Peo asked, surprised.

"There are two classes of people on this planet, and we've seen only one," said Tardo. "Those we have seen are freemen. The others are no better than animals. We give no aid that helps men tighten their hold over their fellows."

"There are two kinds of people on this planet, and we've only seen one," Tardo said. "The ones we've seen are free individuals. The others are no better than animals. We don't provide any help that allows people to tighten their grip on others."

"If you haven't seen them, how do you know there is another class?" demanded Peo. "There is no evidence of any such situation."

"If you haven't seen them, how do you know there's another class?" Peo insisted. "There's no evidence of anything like that."

"The evidence is well hidden. But if you think your stomach can take it now, I'll tell you. If you remember your history, colonizing ships 1000 years ago had no space to carry animals along. They had to depend on native animal life of the planet, and this planet had none."

"The evidence is hard to find. But if you think you can handle it now, I'll share it with you. If you recall your history, colonizing ships a thousand years ago didn't have room to transport animals. They had to rely on the native wildlife of the planet, and this planet had none."

"Saranta said that. But I don't see ..."

"Saranta said that. But I don't see ..."

"Those were delicious steaks, weren't they?" remarked Tardo quietly.

"Those steaks were amazing, weren't they?" Tardo said softly.

Transcriber's Note:

Transcriber's Note:

This etext was produced from If Worlds of Science Fiction September 1954. Extensive research did not uncover any evidence that the U.S. copyright on this publication was renewed. Minor spelling and typographical errors have been corrected without note.

This etext was produced from If Worlds of Science Fiction September 1954. Extensive research did not uncover any evidence that the U.S. copyright on this publication was renewed. Minor spelling and typographical errors have been corrected without note.


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